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Gaara by xjuggernaughtx Gaara by xjuggernaughtx
I got bored and decided to continue my non-pony art. Since I've been watching a ton of Naruto, Gaara was a natural choice. I'm not 100% behind the shape of his eyes and there is something off with the jawline, but all in all these wasn't bad.
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MORGisback Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The Right temple's off, which in turn sets off the entire jaw line. Bring it closer to the eyes. In terms of the eyes, not so almond shaped or pointed up, it gives them this odd, slanted look.

In terms of the chin, just a bit higher up. To far down gives him a sort of..."horse shaped" look (No pun intended. =D)

However, for someone who draws mostly....pony(?) stuff, it's actually pretty good! Keep up the good work!
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xjuggernaughtx Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
Thanks! Yeah, I definitely need more practice with the anime style, or any style of human. I'll have to go back and look at the eyes. I'm sure you are right that they are pointed up more than they should be, but I need to take a look at my model and see where I went wrong. I'm really bad at undersketching, so that kind of positioning problem happens to me a lot. I'm pretty good at ponies by now, so I don't run into it as much, but with new territory, my weaknesses are more exposed. I'm gonna have to bite the bullet and do some real undersketching with this stuff.

Thanks for the critique. It's very helpful!
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MORGisback Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're quite welcome! Just remember, everyone needs practice! It's nothing to be ashamed of. =D
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firethroughpain Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student General Artist
itsa gaara!!!!!!!
good job!!!!! although the chin is a little long.... but really great job!!!!
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xjuggernaughtx Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
Thanks! Yeah, I'm not that good at humans, but I'm working on my skills there. You should have seen it before when I had the eyes lower than his ear. Yeesh!
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firethroughpain Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student General Artist
hahaha!!!!! that wouldn't have looked right at all!!!!!!
personally i'm not all that good at realistic animals...we all have our faults!!!!!
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